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“ Entertainment ”
Entertainmnet
(Jowo Style) is a example for creative about performance Gangnam Style who is
famous in the world . Jowo Style impact from industry music Korean Pop ( K-pop
) . It full agree from government Korean
so that can take entertainment market from Asian to International market
industry music . The successfull effect to market music Indonesian . So, young
generation in Jogja make video Gangnam Style version young men in Jogja with
can say “Jowo Style” .
K-pop increase colour music in Indonesian .
Inspiration turn up when they was seeing about video Gangnam Style . They
having a notion after see about video will make video (parodi) to for fun. The video is good,
because contains elements tradisional Java. Elements talked about is site who
referable place a tour, the people use cloth Batik, use Java language, then
video talked about funny and already be looked by many people. The video can
carry culture Jogja to oreign countries because of famous .
However, creation
who very interesting but this creation not idea form self . Incident talked
about usually be said with plagiat . It can make image Jogya city to be bad. It
concerning can kill tour us .
In conclusion, we
must wise in the culture who enter in Indonesian and we have to guard culture
traditional us. If original idea from young generation, will be appreciation
exceptionally on top of that more .
:) :) :)
Your topic is interesting.. But, better if you choose more specific title.. :)
BalasHapusokey ningrum . .
BalasHapusthank you about for comment, your idea can be inspiration for me :)
Hello dhadhaidha, here your writing is originally yours and i appreciate it. Maybe you should be careful in your writing. for ex:
BalasHapus1. ...is a example...maybe it should be "is an example" as we know that article "a" used if the next word is consonant word, and "an" used for "vocal word"
2. It full agree from government Korea? what do you mean here?
3. if original idea from your generation? what do you mean here?